Friday 25 August 2017

Literacy Reflection 2017 T3 Wk5

Reflection 
Fast Write 

Mayas Person 

2 comments:

  1. Your fast write is really cool, family time is so much fun; hanging out with the people you love is the best!
    What else have you done for literacy? Have you done your artist's presentation?

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  2. Kia ora Jazmine, its Lavinia here from Grey Main School in Mamaku 1. I like your person description about Maya but next time can you get some hair because she would look better. Do you know the speak bubble, could you face it to the person. You might want to put a number on it because then I can read it in order bye [-_-]

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